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Sarah Leal - week 13
Couldn't shoot with my DSLR this week sorry for the low q :( but I tried experimenting with lighting for the precursor to my ...
Couldn't shoot with my DSLR this week sorry for the low q :( but I tried experimenting with lighting for the precursor to my ...
The 7th photo is very engaging with the model taking up most of the frame. I can also see that you composed the shot to be very symmetrical. It also looks like you used the dodge and burn techniques that Kashif taught us.
ReplyDeleteI really like your composition and my favorite one is the fifth one because of the contrast and linework
ReplyDeleteThese asymmetrical compositions are very engaging and invite the viewer to come up with the rest of the narrative involving the model!
ReplyDeletethe symmetric photo is poppin' I love it. I like how you used simplistic angles that captivate the details
ReplyDeleteI like your use of depth of field & the way you use objects in the foreground!
ReplyDeleteur 6th and 7th photos go very well together. the lighting in that photo makes your models face look like its glowing. the 6th image sort of reminds me of the end of donnie darko. good shit
ReplyDeleteI love this juicy obstruction! It's so interesting to have something blocking the full view of the audience especially when we love to absorb everything from what we see. I think it's also interesting when the object in the way is unknown. Or how would the meaning change if you knew what the object was that was in the way? Great photos!
ReplyDeleteThe experimentation with foreground and background in these sets probably brought the best elements to light.
ReplyDeleteGreat portraits! Also I really liked the photo of the striped lines. You demonstrated great depth of field.
ReplyDeleteomg she looks so lonely sitting all alone :-(. Love how the swirlies are interacting with her unknowingly though. I also really enjoy the fifth photo in how it’s a sort of implied symmetry as it’s not exactly symmetrical but still communicates a symmetrical look. Super rad photos.
ReplyDelete1st photo is a great use of rule of thirds. I feel like it could be in a movie. Is she waiting for an RTS? Joining the circus? Stood up on a date? Idk, but im here for it. well done.
ReplyDeleteMarci, I urge you to reevaluate how you utilize the compositional elements, symmetry, pattern, texture, leading lines and all not very clear in your images. The overall images are fine, and I appreciate the creative efforts you've made with regards to the foreground and background relationships and you should definitely keep that up, but I want you too look at some more image examples of the compositional elements just so I'm sure you have a definite grasp of them. Otherwise good work.
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