I really like how you manipulated the flowers for your photos this week. Very fun and dynamic and I like how you played with composition throughout, well done.
The first photo is by far my favorite. I love the image and the use of blurring, it makes me feel like im drunk or something looking at it. you did a great job this week, well done!
I enjoy this sad little flower friend floating through life. sometimes life just carries you through the water currents and y'know, you just have to ride the waves.
Antonio, You choice of the flowers and vase did not work along with the way you composed your images. Because the vase is transparent and the flowers are small, they are lost in the very wide compositions you've created. Leading lines are not present, symmetry isn't present, neither is texture or pattern. The framing of the shots does not set up the vase and flowers to interact within the picture plane in an interesting way either. Symmetry has an equality to it, almost as if you have folded the image in half, or mirrored it. leading lines, helps the eyes travel to specific points of the photo, contrast puts white with very dark.( you had this with the flower in the water) and pattern is where shapes repeat themselves and texture, is a visual representation of a touch. Light is also an element that isn't present. I suggest looking up examples of these terms and being more critical with your choices of where and what to photograph. Overall fair attempt.
I really like how you manipulated the flowers for your photos this week. Very fun and dynamic and I like how you played with composition throughout, well done.
ReplyDeleteGreat photos this week! I love the placement of the flower in each photo. The contrast really adds to each composition.
ReplyDeleteI like how you incorporated the flowers in this shoot. I like the contrast in each shot.
ReplyDeleteThe first photo is by far my favorite. I love the image and the use of blurring, it makes me feel like im drunk or something looking at it. you did a great job this week, well done!
ReplyDeleteI love he feeling of lonesomeness the flower evokes in these pictures
ReplyDeleteI love he feeling of lonesomeness the flower evokes in these pictures
ReplyDeleteI like the dynamic feel of these pictures, and how you used the flower in all different situations.
ReplyDeleteI enjoy this sad little flower friend floating through life. sometimes life just carries you through the water currents and y'know, you just have to ride the waves.
ReplyDeleteAntonio, You choice of the flowers and vase did not work along with the way you composed your images. Because the vase is transparent and the flowers are small, they are lost in the very wide compositions you've created. Leading lines are not present, symmetry isn't present, neither is texture or pattern. The framing of the shots does not set up the vase and flowers to interact within the picture plane in an interesting way either. Symmetry has an equality to it, almost as if you have folded the image in half, or mirrored it. leading lines, helps the eyes travel to specific points of the photo, contrast puts white with very dark.( you had this with the flower in the water) and pattern is where shapes repeat themselves and texture, is a visual representation of a touch. Light is also an element that isn't present. I suggest looking up examples of these terms and being more critical with your choices of where and what to photograph. Overall fair attempt.
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