your first two photos are your strongest, the shadows complement and seduce the structures you've photographed. your photos this week definitely display a strong sense of light however some of the shots are a little awkward and obsolete (5th and 9th respectfully) i really like your 4th image and the glassiness it carries, i also love the triangular background of the leaves which adds another conceptual dimension to the photo other than it just being a glassy piano, however the bottom right corner is a little over exposed and i would have made sure to fill in that triangular opening completely. overall i think there are some great photos in here, but i also think there is potential, i would just be careful with what you decide to take pictures of and think thematically even if it is in terms of documentation.
your first two photos are your strongest, the shadows complement and seduce the structures you've photographed. your photos this week definitely display a strong sense of light however some of the shots are a little awkward and obsolete (5th and 9th respectfully) i really like your 4th image and the glassiness it carries, i also love the triangular background of the leaves which adds another conceptual dimension to the photo other than it just being a glassy piano, however the bottom right corner is a little over exposed and i would have made sure to fill in that triangular opening completely. overall i think there are some great photos in here, but i also think there is potential, i would just be careful with what you decide to take pictures of and think thematically even if it is in terms of documentation.
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