Antonio, I always look forward to reading your poetry and seeiog how you intertwine it with the photos. That being said, if your using it to inspire your Floridian story and these are the first ones, I think your photos should serve the narrative of your poem. Because you use so much symbolism and relaying a message, and you could use your photos to make it that much powerful
Your photos seem to deal with a lot of abstraction this week, although interesting, i wish the photos were more in focus unless this goes along with your Floridian story. The poems that you pair with your images are beautiful and I would like to see you experiment more with your body.
Interesting experimentation with out of focus photography. Keep up the experimentation and I'm sure you'll get some really good photos for the Florida Story.
Antonio, I always look forward to reading your poetry and seeiog how you intertwine it with the photos. That being said, if your using it to inspire your Floridian story and these are the first ones, I think your photos should serve the narrative of your poem. Because you use so much symbolism and relaying a message, and you could use your photos to make it that much powerful
ReplyDeleteYour photos seem to deal with a lot of abstraction this week, although interesting, i wish the photos were more in focus unless this goes along with your Floridian story. The poems that you pair with your images are beautiful and I would like to see you experiment more with your body.
ReplyDeleteInteresting experimentation with out of focus photography. Keep up the experimentation and I'm sure you'll get some really good photos for the Florida Story.
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